Advice on essay writing from the Academic Section
Foreword
This section contains advice for all students on good essay writing habits. It is divided into two parts:
A. Study patterns for essay writing
B. Writing the essay
- A. Study patterns for essay writing
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Content
01 Identify your best approach to studying
02 Start early and positively
03 Clarify which sources are relevant
04 Never lose sight of the essay question
05 Learn how to skim read
06 Be clear about what you want from the texts
07 Keep your notes organised and referenced
- 01 Identify your best approach to studying
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No-one can lay down rules about how to study, but it is worth working out a rhythm that suits you, and that will enable you to make the best of your time as a student. This includes deciding when and where to read as well as how to plan and write an essay. Some people find they are at their best in the mornings while other prefer to work late into the night, so it is a good idea to decide whether you are a lark or an owl and plan accordingly. Can you concentrate best in the Library, or do you prefer to work at home? Do you work best in long, uninterrupted blocks of time, or do you prefer to work in short bursts, with frequent breaks? You also need to recognise that your friends' rhythms may not be the same as yours: some people produce good work by studying through the night sustained on black coffee, others do not.
[Back to top] - 02 Start early and positively
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Try to embark on your essay in a positive frame of mind. The best way to do this is to begin work well in advance of the deadline and then you will have time to enjoy your reading. Make sure you allow time to think as well as read; talk about the topic with others, mull it over, re-read your notes, follow-up further references. Writing an essay is like cooking: you may be able to throw everything together quickly in the end, but unless you have decent ingredients it won't taste very good.
[Back to top] - 03 Clarify which sources are relevant
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You should have been shown how to find material in the Library, but if not, there will be someone willing to help with information at the issue desk nearby. But first you need to be sure what material you want. If the reading list is not clear to you, then ask the tutor who prepared it to clarify which material is relevant for your particular essay. Some students seem to feel that it is 'cheating' to talk with the tutor about an essay in preparation. On the contrary, such discussions can be a useful part of the learning process.
[Back to top] - 04 Never lose sight of the essay question
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You will need to decide how much reading to do. A common difficulty is that students read so much and take so many notes that they exhaust their interest in the topic before they even get to the stage of trying to organise and order their thoughts. If you keep the essay question in mind all the time you should find ideas occurring to you as you read, and then it is easier to decide when to stop reading and begin organising these ideas into an essay.
[Back to top] - 05 Learn how to skim read
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Oddly enough (and this will vary from subject to subject) you may have to learn how not to read books. Unless your study focuses on a few selected texts, you may find that you do not have enough time to read all of the books all the way through. Tutors may want you to look at a number of different sources and you have to develop strategies for finding what you need. Some books are like annotated bibliographies, in which case you will probably need to concentrate on one pithy section and then follow up the leads in its footnotes. For books with a more extended treatment of a theme, try starting with the Conclusion, and then use the chapter headings and index to direct you to the most relevant sections.
[Back to top] - 06 Be clear about what you want from the texts
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Taking notes from your reading is a rather personal process, but it is important to try to develop a system that works well for you. It may be helpful to think about why you are reading something. In relation to writing an essay, there are perhaps three main reasons:
a) to collect information and ideas;
b) to find some good quotations; and,
c) to trigger ideas of your own.In the case of (a), the best way to take notes is to read the passage or section right through and then summarise the key points in your own words; this is a good basis from which to return to the text for (b), to select appropriate quotations. Obviously you should note down the ideas or comments of your own as they occur to you. When taking notes, you should try to avoid extensive quotations; at the time it often seems easier to copy out vast amounts of material than to select and summarise, but it only postpones thinking. NEVER mark a Library book. It destroys the book for future readers and is a sign of lazy, sloppy thinking.
[Back to top] - 07 Keep your notes organised and referenced
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It is extremely important that when re-reading your notes you can easily identify what type of notes they are. Are they your précis of the content? Are they quotations? Or are they your own ideas? The simplest system is to put quotation marks around quotations, and to put your own ideas in brackets, perhaps with your initials (like alterations on a cheque), but some people prefer other methods, such as different coloured pens. In both cases you should include details of the relevant page numbers alongside your notes. Plagiarism (passing off someone else's work as your own), is a serious offence.
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- B. Writing the essay
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Although there can be no hard and fast rules about how to write a good essay, the following points should help to guide you in the right direction; be sure to read some of the other advice sections as well.
Content
01 To plan or not to plan?
02 Be shrewd with your selection
03 Focus on the question
04 Empathise with the reader of your essay
05 Convince yourself of your argument first
06 Keep to one idea per paragraph
07 Label images and tables clearly
08 Present information in the most appropriate way
09 Be careful how you choose to validate your argument
10 All evidence and no explanation?
11 Take the necessary steps to maintain your clarity
12 Have the right style
13 Proof read your essay thoroughly
14 Keep a spare copy for yourself
15 Follow the essay up with your tutor
16 Concentrate on the feedback as well as the mark
17 Follow up the mark
18 Ultimately, find your own best approach
- 01 To plan or not to plan?
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People construct essays in many different ways but it will help you if you identify which way suits you best. Try starting with a plan or diagram of some sort which maps out the sequence of ideas, perhaps in answer to a series of imagined questions such as: What exactly is the essay about? How am I going to tackle it? What evidence am I going to bring in to support my arguments? Is there supplementary material which could be brought in to strengthen or challenge the argument? Where does all this get us in the end?
If you find that you can follow your plan fairly closely as you write your essay then you are probably a one-draft or two-draft person. Some people find that even with a detailed plan their ideas only become clear as they write, and the finished essay bears little resemblance to the original plan. If you are one of those people who don't find out what you are writing about until you've written it, then don't agonise over the commas in the opening paragraph; you are a two-draft person, or even a multi-draft person. Word processors make the business of redrafting easy, but ironically for some people they can also make writing a good essay harder because it is so easy to get bogged down in the detail instead of letting the thoughts and line of argument flow.
[Back to top] - 02 Be shrewd with your selection
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A good essay is a selective analysis. Before starting to write you may have gathered pages and pages of notes but the skill lies in selecting the evidence, organising the material into an argument, and arguing the point concisely. If you find yourself going over the word limit (usually 2,500 words, about 8-10 double spaced typed pages), you are probably including too much material which does not contribute to the argument or thesis. If your essay is too long, you may be penalised. It is worth remembering that quantity is not the same as quality.
[Back to top] - 03 Focus on the question
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To be good, an essay needs to be focused. If you have been given a question to answer, then answer it. If you have been given a more open-ended essay topic or title, you will probably find it helpful to frame a suitable question to answer as this will help you organise your thoughts and your material into an argument. Keep the question or title in your mind as you write. Ask yourself how each paragraph or section relates to the question. Students seldom recognise that considerable thought has gone into the setting of essay titles, to define a field, to give scope, but also to delimit the amount of discussion required.
[Back to top] - 04 Empathise with the reader of your essay
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Think of your reader. It helps the reader if the essay has an introduction which raises in a general way the kinds of issues with which the essay will be concerned, and gives the reader some kind of guidance as to the sequence in which these issues will be tackled. Then in the body of the essay you should develop your material, always trying to make the links between the different ideas as clear as possible. And finally, there should be a set of concluding remarks which sum up, rather then introduce new material. Don't worry about trying to come to tidy, tight conclusions. If there are ambiguities, or if in the end you feel that the question posed cannot be fully resolved, then it is better to say so.
[Back to top] - 05 Convince yourself of your argument first
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An essay should have an argument, a thesis, or a point of view. You need to convince your reader, and to do so is much easier if you are convinced yourself. It is possible, but not so easy, to write a good, convincing essay defending a thesis with which you yourself disagree. But it is almost impossible to write a good essay if you have not made up your mind and have no clear point of view about the topic. Having said that, you should aim to convince your reader with evidence and argument, not with a harangue.
[Back to top] - 6. Keep to one idea per paragraph
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It may help with the structure if you give your essay informative side headings. Even if you do not formally write in these headings, it is the mark of a good, readable discussion that you could write them in - or your reader could - if necessary. This means that your text needs recognisable paragraphs, each of which contains a theme or idea. And when the theme changes, so does the paragraph.
[Back to top] - 07 Label images and tables clearly
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If you are dealing with numerical data, you should make sure that any tables you present have a self-explanatory title, so that they can be read without the accompanying text, if necessary. However, the tables themselves will rarely be self-explanatory, so you should explain in the body of your essay what you think the table shows, and how it relates to your argument.
[Back to top] - 08 Present information in the most appropriate way
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You can make your essay easier to read, and more convincing, by presenting data in more imaginative ways. Try not to use a single table to present a number of different types of comparison; instead, produce fresh tables for each dimension of the argument. And don't present the data in such a way that the reader has to do a lot of work on it (e.g. calculating percentages, proportions or trends) in order to see how it supports your argument; do the work yourself, and use the table to present the results. You should also ask yourself whether a table is the best way to present your data. A pie-chart, a histogram, a strip-chart, or a graph might help you to communicate the same information more directly and convincingly to your reader.
[Back to top] - 09 Be careful how you choose to validate your argument
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One of the common weaknesses in essay writing is the assumption that quoting an author whose opinion agrees with your own counts as evidence in your favour. But your reader will be asking, 'Why should I accept your view, or for that matter the view of the authors you quote?' To answer that question, you need to mention some supporting arguments or data. If you don't have any, then you should not try to hide the fact. Instead, include it in your essay; comment on its absence, and say what you'd like to know regarding what the evidence would look like, and why you think there isn't enough data.
[Back to top] - 10 All evidence and no explanation?
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A different weakness is the tendency some students have to compile masses of evidence, but without telling the reader what it means or why it is being amassed. If, as you are writing, you keep in mind the question 'Why are you telling me all this?', it should never occur to your reader.
[Back to top] - 11 Take the necessary steps to maintain your clarity
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If you get really stuck, try to decide where the problem lies. Do you have too much material? Because you find material interesting doesn't mean to say it is going to be relevant to the essay question. Do you feel you have lost the thread of the idea? Perhaps your approach to the question changed as you were writing. It is often helpful to try to explain your ideas to a friend, or if you have time, put your essay aside for a day or two. Sometimes when you come back to it after a break it suddenly seems much clearer. If you can't resolve the problem yourself, then you can always go and see your tutor about it. S/he cannot write your essay for you but will be able to help you by, perhaps, clarifying the question, suggesting a different line of enquiry or reassuring you that your approach is valid.
[Back to top] - 12 Have the right style
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There are a number of conventions you should observe about how to organise and present your quotations, footnotes, and bibliography, which may be subject-specific.
The following stylistic conventions are fairly generic:
[Back to top] - 13 Proof read your essay thoroughly
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Always read through a finished essay carefully. Make sure it is within the word limit, and correct errors of spelling and punctuation. Don't rely on the spell checker on your word processor; a spell checker cannot tell you if you mean 'their' or 'there', or 'start' or 'smart'. A good way of checking for problems with syntax and punctuation is to read your essay through out loud. It should flow reasonably smoothly, and the length and structure of your sentences should allow you time to breathe. If English is not your first language, try to get a native English speaker to read your essay through for you. An uncorrected essay looks unloved, and carelessness in the writer can hardly stimulate a tutor to care about what you have written.
[Back to top] - 14 Keep a spare copy for yourself
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Keep a copy of your essay when you hand it in, in case of mishaps or second marking.
[Back to top] - 15 Follow the essay up with your tutor
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If your essay seems to be late in being returned to you, don't be afraid to ask your tutor about it. All things being equal, most essays are returned within a fortnight or three weeks, but this will depend on your departmental policy.
[Back to top] - 16 Concentrate on the feedback as well as the mark
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When your essay is returned, make sure that you don't just concentrate on the overall mark, but spend some time trying to understand how your tutor's marginal and concluding comments explain why the essay got the mark it did. If you still find it puzzling, or if you don't understand some of the comments, you should talk to your tutor about it. The best time to do this is probably during your tutor's 'office hours', a period of time each week when s/he will be in the office and available to talk to students about anything relating to their coursework. As a general rule, students make far less use of this important opportunity for one-to-one contact than they could.
[Back to top] - 17 Follow up the mark
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If you can't sort out your worries about the mark in this way, most departments have a system of double marking for essays. This means that students can ask that their essay be marked by another member of staff in the department, and the initial mark either confirmed or altered. But be warned: the second marker may judge that your essay should have received a lower mark than the one your tutor originally gave you.
[Back to top] - 18 Ultimately, find your own best approach
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Finally, you should remember that none of these rules and pieces of advice are absolute. Good essays come in a variety of shapes and forms, and one of the pleasures of essay writing lies in experimenting with different approaches to the task. We hope, nonetheless, that these guidelines will be of some help.
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Advice on Essay Writing
A. Study Patterns for Essay Writing
1. Identify your best approach to studying
- Work out a rhythm for study that suits you
- Try to resist taking on the study habits of someone else
2. Start early and positively
- Begin preparing for the essay well in advance of the deadline
- Start by being positive and interested in the topic
- Talk to friends and classmates about it
- Be careful about which 'ingredients' you choose for it
3. Clarify which sources are relevant
- Speak to the librarian if you need help
- Talking to academic staff is not cheating
4. Never lose sight of the essay question
- Avoid over-reading to the point of losing interest in the topic
- Always keep the essay question in mind when researching
5. Learn how to skim read
- Do not be scared to disregard a book you have started to read
- Only read what is relevant, unless for background information
- Make full use of indexes, bibliographies, and footnotes
- As a strategy, start at the conclusion and work your way out
6. Be clear about what you want from the texts
- Have a clear purpose in mind when reading and researching
- Avoid copying too much text rather than summarising
7. Keep your notes organised and referenced
- As you make them, be sure about what they are for
- Include details about source and page numbers
Advice on Essay Writing
B. Writing the Essay
1. To plan or not to plan?
- Try it out to see whether you benefit from planning
- Draft and re-draft
- Avoid letting word processing bog you down with trivialities
2. Be shrewd with your selection
- Remember that selecting the most appropriate material is half the battle
- A good essay registers well within the word limit
- Make sure all material contributes to your argument
3. Focus on the question
- Answer it
- Always keep the question in mind when you read and write
- Check that each paragraph relates to the question
- Trust that the choice of the question was meticulous
4. Empathise with the reader of your essay
- First, introduce the reader to the main areas of the essay
- Give some kind of guidance as to the sequence of ideas
- Develop your own material within the body of the essay
- Signpost, so the argument is easy to follow
- Finish with appropriate, concluding remarks
5. Convince yourself of your argument first
- Every essay should have a clear and convincing standpoint
- It is hard to convince others of something you yourself doubt
6. Keep to one idea per paragraph
- As a strategy, try using paragraph headings in your drafts
7. Label images and tables clearly
- Make all titles self-explanatory and readable without the text
- Make sure you fully explain the relevance of tables in the text
8. Present information in the most appropriate way
- Make sure you, not the reader, is doing the hard work
- Be sure of your choice of presentation
9. Be careful how you choose to validate your argument
- Do not rely on quoting any author who agrees with you
10. All evidence and no explanation?
- Make sure you gather relevant information only
- Always explain its relevance rather than assume it
- Be clear about why the evidence is being amassed
11. Take the necessary steps to maintain your clarity
- Avoid confusing what is relevant with what is interesting
- Always keep your objectivity
- Discuss with and test your essay argument out on friends
- Take breaks when your clarity is under threat
- Do not be afraid to approach your teachers
12. Have the right style
- Include the relevant personal details with your essay
- Number pages and present them appropriately
- Word process your essay
- Check your use of citations and references
- Check your use of footnotes
13. Proof read your essay thoroughly
- Always proof read your essay
- Do not rely on spell checkers
- Read your essay aloud for syntax and punctuation
- Read once for meaning, once for grammar
14. Keep a spare copy for yourself
- In case of mishaps, always keep a copy of the essay
15. Follow the essay up with your tutor
- Do not be afraid to follow up a late return
16. Concentrate on the feedback as well as the mark
- Make sure you understand the tutor's comments
- Relate those comments directly to the essay
- Act upon them for next time
17. Follow up the mark
- Pursue, if you feel you have significantly underachieved
- Be certain before you appeal for second marking
18. Ultimately, find your own best approach
- These are only guidelines for good practice
- They are descriptive rather than prescriptive
- All great essays have an element of originality about them